I also found this poem to be adorable and sweet. You have a talent for writing love poems even if they are sad ones. Keep it up really emotional and hit the heart. Well done on this an enjoyable read. ~mel

Overall, another pretty good poem. you write off of simple topics.. but you seem to write it very well. maybe expand your vocabulary so you don't bore the reader too much with simple words. other than that, well done.. again. keep writing. love seems like your favorite topic, which is mine as well. :] you undoubtly understand the meaning of love and everything that it entails, it seems like you've been through love many times. 5/5.

This made me get teary. thats exactly how i feel i can relate to this poem so well. It's a very touching poem with beautiful rhythem