=) It's an...unusual poem? Lol, I really really liked it. The style you used was pretty simple, so there wasn't anything wrong with the flow or anything. It was basically perfect...but I would have liked it to go on. Coz I like the idea you've used. Nice job! |
by ABake
Not at all unusual...as the other commenter said. |
by Jaime
Was this sarcastic, or in some way mocking religious people? I only ask because it seems odd to say that you want to be Gods "tool". |
by Jaime
Okay, now that you have informed me that it is, in fact, a serious poem, I'm better able to state my opinion. |