Merciless Storm

by x Mo x   Aug 6, 2007


The distant roar
Of an approaching storm.
Dark infected clouds
Cause shadows to form.

A clap of thunder
A bolt of light
The storm takes over
Turning the day to night.

Rain like daggers
Cut apart the flames.
A merciless destroyer
Causing damage all the same.

Nothing in its way
The storm presses on
It takes the suns beauty
Until every creation is gone.

~Storm at camp Mia Shalom~

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  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply great. Nice writing!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nic

    I love this poem.
    i like the way you used daggers to describe the rain.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Lovely. The imagery was...just wonderful. and it flowed perfectly, I'm WOW'd. Seriously, great poem.

    Thanks for the coments, Much appreciated.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    THis Poem was incredible. IT was very clear and precise, and it flowed extremely well, I give it three thumbs up, but I need to find a third thumb first. IT was a wonderful piece of work, I could feel the storm coming when I read this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Wow. wow. wow. And just when I thought I had read your best poem. Lol... it was really really good. I'm guessing you wrote this during a storm, so you really used your creativity and it was so original! I loved the phrase "Rain like daggers"....it was beautiful. The last stanza was really really good too.

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