Well CMP it looks unique and the style seems descrete. Thats the best part of it. The word choice is also nice and the rhythm is great. You have had your own style it seems :)

Tc
Fsams

Wow! Very unique, I like your style. The flow I rate a 4/5 but I rated your poem 5/5 because the overall poem overlooking minimal breaks in the flow was awesome!

Like Fsams and Silverkiss said, this poem was very unique. You have a great style and a good use of words to go along with it. The flow was a little choppy, but still likeable.
Well done,
Elaine. 4/5