by manic moments Aug 6, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
\ - / sorry if it doesn't really make sense.. its been in my head for a long time and I jus needed release \ - / |
by Tripp
Wow. If I could get across my feelings for this poem in words I could. The imagery is among the best I have ever read, EVER. Diction, rhythm, and rhyme were all near flawless. |
by Willow
Your use of words has painted a picture with memries i have ignored. This poem sent chills down my spine. 5/5. |
by kia
Very dark imagery. You explain what you want the viewer to be seeing very precisely and clearly. A very dark image of a nightmare. Liked it. You know your words very well. You dont seem to take long to get your words out the words felt like they just rolled out of your mind. 5/5 Kia xoxo |