Comments : Sad endings

  • 17 years ago

    by schylar

    I must say for 11 years of age, this poem is amazing. i've been writing since i was about 11 too. keep writing n i'll keep reading. great work!!! ~schylar~

  • 17 years ago

    by 1A kayla

    Theres way mor but, i dinnt want 2 put it on the internet uno? well i hope u guys like it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by pceluvr4hapenes

    I really like this poem!!!

    i can't say i feel ur pain but

    anyone can through these words.

  • 17 years ago

    by 1A kayla

    Ill put the real version on rite now

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    Wonderful piece. I'm going through exactly the same thing, right now. Except, he hasn't moved. In fact, he still goes to my school. But he's two years older, and he's graduating this year. So I won't see him after that. But there's no way I could talk to him, no matter how much I'd like to. Anyway, thanks for making me feel like I'm not alone. Great work.

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