Shattering Heart (first poem)

by Ben   Aug 6, 2007


My heart is twisted in ways it shouldn't
My heart hurts though I wish it wouldn't
I cry inside my heart beat dies
As my heart shatters into a thousand pieces

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  • 17 years ago

    by apey

    Aww rlly short but rlly cute and i love it a lot super AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie

    Dooode Awesome first poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Short and painfull.. thats wt i wd call it :P

    brilliant work.. truly heartfelt
    damn good for your first attempt.. i sopose ^^
    keep it up

    looking forward for more of your work

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Short and simple : ) yet really good. Sad as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow this is really good especially for a first poem cant wait till you write more 5/5

    laura

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