Awe... This is so sad :( Sucks to have people you love go away or as said here can't reach and touch anymore =/ Just sometimes I wish as well I could turn back hands of times. Spend one more day in the arms of someone we love. They will always stay in are heart :) And hopefully you stay in your heart. 5/5 Awesome poem so sad I feel so much feeling in this poem. Brilliant! :) Thanks for reading my poem.

Beautiful poem.
Very sad, and emotional.
Good flow.
I think everyone wants to turn back time sometimes if they could.
Great piece of writing.
Loved reading it.
Take care

This poem was really cute, it had a deeper meaning to it making it oh so good. You did fantastic! I loved the ending stanza
"If i could run away
I wont have to pretend
I'd have you with me
the way i did back then."

You did such a good job, keep it up!

Well done i can understand the way you felling when you rot thsi peice great job keep up the good work

That is cute, sad, well written, emotional, breath taking, suffocatingly phenominal, and over all just perfect. I wouldnt change a thing. It's. . . wow. 5/5. lol I'm speechless.

I wrote a poem a little like this, BUT YOURS IS 100 TIMES BETTER, its so amazing

I can really relate to the sentiments of this one. Excellent rhyme sceme, language and imagery, but it is the pure emotion that gives this piece its power. A great poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

O_O Once again an amazing piece of writing, You have a strong talent and also you have a way with words. It takes me now quite a while just to write one stanza its as though Ive lost my power to just let go of my feelings, while reading your poems It encourages me to write more ^^ xxxx

Wow, this one is so captivating, so powerful. Every line is simply flawless. You created superb atmosphere, and whole piece is very unique, with excellently expressed emotions. The imagery in it is very vivid. This poem is going to my favs., it has something so deep and touching.
My favorite stanza is:
-There's a glass in between
see your hollow hand on the other side
I cant feel your touch,
but i feel you inside.-
I can relate to some parts of it.
Well done, 5/5 from me