Cute poem, in that it was short, sweet and straight to the point, and on top of that, it had a rhyme, loved it 5/5 x

This poem seemed a little rushed to me. I did like the meaning behind it but it seemed to go to fast. A few better words to strength this piece would create alot better emotions. None the less an interested piece. ~mel

This poem is okay. I know at the end you said the poem wasn't rushed but it seems like it is. It's not mean't to be slow, i know that..but it's just too fast. I liked the topic though, of bullying. To improve this poem I think you need better vocabulary.

-Shannon <3