Loving You Every Single Day (Trijan Refrain) (Collab)

by Jenni Marie   Aug 6, 2007


**Collab With Robert Kerry Gardiner**

Loving you every single day,
Nothing I'd rather do
Together we will be okay
And share our love so true
Wanting to stay in your embrace
And with you I've found my place
Wanting to stay
Wanting to stay
Loving you, forever we'll face

Loving you every single day
My angel from above
Promise from you I'll never stray
But share our deepest love
Hoping I will lay in your arms
And keep you away from life's harms
Hoping I will
Hoping I will
Always I'll be within your charms

Loving you every single day
I've done so from the start
Wont ever go seperate ways
For we've given our hearts
Stay together forever more
These feelings we can nott ignore
Stay together
Stay together
Loving you, like no one before

The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines.
Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas, although a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line
at the beginning of each stanza. In other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different.
The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8.
The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:

Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c

Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Second stanza is greatest. I don't like first stanza very much.
    Loving you every single day
    ^I also don't like this line.
    I don't like this poem to much. This is just my opinion but I think that you two could write this piece better. 4/5

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