"The sun I shining", shouldn't it be "is shining" And the flow is a little off. Besides that I think it's a nice nature poem. Autumn is my favorite season and you described it beautifully. 5/5

marcella

Ah such a calm feeling! I love autumn, its my favorite season. This poem also has great imagery. I could almost feel the soft breeze and the leaves. I love it! Keep it up!

~Morgan~

Vey wonderful for me... cos is very-very nice...

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Pretty vivid images i'm getting from this, and I can sense the imagination and warmth.

Great description, it's wonderful, nice job.