Short and simple yet dark and well written. you did a good job o this one even though i felt it could have been a little lomger.
love Tara-Kay
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I realy like like this poem its dark and kinda spooky
really well writen 5/5
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It started off rhyming and then it seems you changed your mind lol. It was unique though and I did enjoy the read. It was kind of mysterious. Nice job. 4/5

marcella

Oh scary! That was great imagery! I was watching that man creep around in the dark. Oh gives me chills! The idea is original too. Ive never read about a theif...its awesome! Great job!

~Morgan~

Well you should put this one to into stanzas =) but anyway it was a good poem, using the last words as the title is really effective, well done. I think you can improve this poem - I know coz you're a good writer.

Kepe up the good work.

Wow... it so wonderful... although it written as dark poem... but its very good...

This poem is excellently written. Imagery is superb and atmosphere of this piece is amazingly haunting. I really like it, 5/5