I can really relate to this and i know alot of other people can too. its a really great write i enjoyed reading it another 5/5

laura

This was another amazing poem, wow. I really enjoyed this one, it was really well written and flowed so well. I loved the wording and the rhyming.
well done, my friend
xxxxxxx

Gosh!! that was a sad piece.. ur still young to had that kind of thoughts. all the lines was amazing and very worded. just keep on writing all what u feel and keep it up! i enjoyed alot 5/5

love lots,
Sweet lig

I liked the poem, especially the line, "You're life is only fingertips now," except "you're" should be "your". When I saw the title, I expected something different, so thanks for the surprise. =] I also like the vocabulary you used, and I loved the rhyming, especially the last stanza. Nice work.

"In a world with no hope"

Maybe . . . "without any hope" instead.

"You're life is only fingertips now"

Your* "You're " Means you are.

Last two stanzas were my favorite. xD The rest of the poem was amazing, as well. Great emotion. There actually was a few things I thought needed work on, but that's no biggie at all. xD

You're a wonderful poet, I think you'll go on my favorites when I finish. xD

5.5