Wow i love this poem its very creative and the words spoke their own language i love it !!!5/5
laura

There is so much creativity in this. It flows absolutely perfectly throughout and is wrotten so well. This was by far the best i've seen on here lately, wow.
love Tara-Kay
x

I love this poem! One of the best. The words flowed together nicely and the imagery was truely amazing.
Great job!
5/5
Keep up the good work
*Brittney

I must say at the beginning of this poem I completely thought " He can't outdo the first stanza, the ending is going to stink" But, I was wrong.x D

It was a great poem, beginning to end. Just like all of yours are. So many people either have too strong of a beginning or ending, but you have the ability to even it out flawlessly.

I'm sorry my comments aren't very useful, I kind of wish I could fin d something wrong, just so that they could be useful. Lol.
But, your poems need no work, no help, no adjusting - they're perfect. xD

keep it up.

5.5