Wow...

"...but one day you will finally
turn your day into night
make your own choice ,your own way
you thank yourself because its all you
have to look forward to, a sense of
darkness,painless,fearless,speechless
night!"

that's scary! but i loved this piece, pretty much true 5/5 keep writing!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Whoa, catchy and beautifully done. The flow here was amazing and powerful. 5/5