I'm Not Sorry

by aDORKable x3   Aug 6, 2007


How could I ever be sorry for the way that I felt?
It's no one's fault that your kisses made me melt.
Your eyes held my gaze for many of those days -
But in the end, you were just too far gone in your ways.
I could never feel bad about the way you made me feel,
Because once upon a time, I knew that it was real.
Your hugs could once light up even the darkest night;
But after awhile, I just gave up; you're not worth the fight.
There were days that your lips were magic to me -
But somehow I missed everything else there was to see.
You were the one who finally opened up my hazel eyes -
And it's sad to say, it also made me come to realize:
There's better things that I could be wasting my time on.
Not that I blame you, you're just to far gone.
But I'm Not Sorry for everything, not sorry at all -
I just needed someone who was stronger to catch my fall.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha

    This one is great! i loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is nice. It isn't best that I read but I am going to give you 5/5, because:
    -topic is original
    -you wrote this piece very good
    -ending is very interesting

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Oh.My.GOSH! How ironic is it that I was writing a poem based on the EXACT same thing last night?! Not finished yet, but close. And after reading yours, I don`t even want to embarrass myself by posting it, lmao :p. This is AMAZING. It really is. Perfect for the way I feel right now, I`m nominating this and adding it to my faves (L) [if my nominations will even work this time :( ] Heartchuu.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This was a nice poem. :) the flow was interrupted in spots, but overall a good, well-written poem!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    This poem just flowed smoothly and strongly all the way through. I disagree with the person above me that it's a sad poem. To me it just seemed like it was about not regretting or feeling bad about what has happened, but rather just getting over it and moving on.

    Getting away from relationships that aren't worth it is hard for a lot of people. I'm glad that you were able to do so, and I'm really happy that you were able to portray your situation through such a beautiful piece of work.

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