How come

by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx   Aug 6, 2007


How come she was blessed with acne,
it makes her unhappy.

sometimes she cries and feels sad,
her friends have none it makes her feel bad.

but she thanks the lord for what she has,
cuz she learned a lesson that they will never have.

under that acne is a beautiful girl,
one that makes the whole world twirl.

without the acne she would never be,
what that twirling world loves to see.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Keep it up dear
    good ritten poem
    5/5
    tc
    your nu friend
    Rohan

  • 17 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    Well cuz i have acne and it was just a quick little poem. so.. yeah.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jaime

    The rhyming was a little forced, and some of the stanzas just completely confused me, to be honest.

    The message is good though, and one day the acne will clear and the beautiful girl underneath will be revealed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Awww beautiful poem!!!! 70/70

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