Wow that is a creepy poem but i really liked it, it had strong words in it! nicely done 5/5

I really love this poem. You took a rose and turned into a powerful piece of poetry. Wonderful imagery and a flawless flow. It was a pleasure to read. 5/5

marcella

That was breathtakingly beautiful ^_^ I completely loved it and I hope you know how talented you are =) I can only hope that I can maybe get even a little close to how good you are with a lot of work =) 5/5 And I'm now a complete fan lols
Rhea

Excellent, The flow and everything is so beautiful. I loved the word choice and the message is clear. 5/5

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Fsams

Few people obtain the gift of rhyming in perfect sync while creating an amazing poem with brilliant effect...amazingly done 5/5

Flawless.
The was really deep, and Dark.
I have goose bumps, and shiver's up my spine, but I loved everyword of it.
Your really talented.
I would give you critique but I have none to give, The flow was amaizng, and the word choice Excellent.
Overall a very memorable peice,
5/5 Elaine.

This poem is great. I like atmosphere that you created. Topic is excellent and you wrote this piece superbly.
It's mysterious beauty
It's deadly charm
With more than a glance
Leaves gashes on arms
^This stanza is AMAZING.
Well done! 5/5

I liked this, although there were a few mistakes.
I liked the way you turned the whole idea of a rose on its head and made it quite deadly. Your descriptions were very vivid in parts of the poem also.
On the third line though, it should be "quite."
Also, you have many homophone errors concerning "you're" and "your." You're is used when shortening down you are, and your is used when something is belonging to. A way to tell if you're using the correct one is to see if you are would work in that sentance...For example (taking a couple of lines from your poem) "as you are life fades" doesn't make sense, however "if you are clean" does. Hope that helped without offending you.
Keep writing.

Wow this one is absolutely powerful from the title up until to its own content,it has deep meaning though i can't really adopt the hidden meaning in it..Nice description too. anyway, Keep up the good work!

Nicely done. I find the thought of gauging a person's purity to determine whether he is worthy of living or not rather fascinating, and worth further notice as well. The descriptions portrayed was divinely vivid and the tone of voice emotive and well articulated. I truly enjoyed this piece, Amber.

This was a fantastic poem. I loved how you wrapped it all arounda rose. . . TALENT. 5/5

WOW! i love it!....i like how you can take something so simple such as a rose and turn it into something so dark and full of emotion.. great job! 5/5