Something about this double etheree truely took my breathe away. The emotions portrayed were really strong I loved reading this from start till finish and never lost interest what so ever. Well done on such an amazing poem. ~mel

Excellent formed poetry. the words were touching and the rhymes were an added bonus!

Wow must care for her alot 5/5 by any chance could you read my poem power of try i love this write and would mean alot if you read it.