Jenna dear. this is a beautiful poem. and i could clearly see where it was headed from the start. good work dear. it was wonderful. i love you and never forget i am here for you

This was just beautiful, i loved the first phrase, 'she sits alone and dreams of airplanes and boats' that was an amazing start to the poem, it makes you think of the subject as longing for the innocence of being a child. the flow was really good too, and the emotion behind the poem was really strong and beautiful.
5/5
gabriella