"Lighten the many shades of blue,"

^My favourite line. Good gosh, that is so deep and personal to me. I'm not sure if I'm reading too far into it, but amazing job with that.

I liked the poem, it seemed smooth to me. I'm sorry you feel the way you do, but eventually you will find someone to love who loves you back. It's sad that you think you are not good enough for whomever this poem is about, because it's not true. You -are- good enough: you are a beautiful person who writes beautiful poetry.

Take care of yourself, and keep writing.
-Jaime :)

PS. With this word: "neer", I would either use "never" or "ne'er". It would be a little easier to understand with either a 'v' or an apostrophe in it.

Nicely written great emotions. i loved it