This is a very touching poem. I loved it. I was able to picture it as if I was there. I look forward to reading more of your work when I have more time.

OMG.. that was damn sad..='(
but a damn good poem =']
.. it made me eyes brink a little. i loved it !
you've expressed urself superbly .. every word was worth reading again n again.. AMAZING..
and even tho its amazingly sad.. its also amazingly beautiful how u expressed it.
Keep up the good work

~Wake~