Im done!!!

by MARI   Aug 7, 2007


I'm am SO tired of my life i cant take it
i am SO tired of crying myself to sleep
i ams so tired of not hating you
i am so tired of waiting for you
i am so-tired of begging you
i am so tired of trying to kill myself
i am so that you don't care
i am so tired of being tired
and most of all i am tired of
what do you want from me
i try and try and try but i guess its not enough

PS. this is a for a friend who i though cared but i was wrong there is no one in this world to trust but yourself!!
people open your eyes and find out who your real friends are

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    I like this one too. the only thing is in the line

    "and most of all i am tired of
    what do you want from me "

    is it supposed to be something like-

    "and most of all im tired of
    wondering what you want from me"

    cos the first part is a statement and the second changes it into a question-maybe reword it?

    But still a great job.
    Like the repetition.

    Aish

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    So true. I really hope you haven't tried to kill yourself sweetie. Nothing that anyone can do to you is worth taking your life over. Talk to me if you want. I'll keep you in my prayers.

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