So true. I really hope you haven't tried to kill yourself sweetie. Nothing that anyone can do to you is worth taking your life over. Talk to me if you want. I'll keep you in my prayers.

I like this one too. the only thing is in the line

"and most of all i am tired of
what do you want from me "

is it supposed to be something like-

"and most of all im tired of
wondering what you want from me"

cos the first part is a statement and the second changes it into a question-maybe reword it?

But still a great job.
Like the repetition.

Aish