While it last

by LoveAndAddictions   Aug 7, 2007


So save it while it last
before tomorrow
slips away from today
because the most beautiful thing in world
is the world itself

-this is the chorus of a song that I'm gonna write when it comes to me this is all i have so far its about global warming let me know what you think about it and if you have any ideas I'm open to suggestions

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoveAndAddictions

    Thanks cy thats sounds alot better now

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is really nice, but should it say, so save it (while) it last, instead of, save it (well) it last?? I like reading poetry from the young, you see the world in a great way. you're not beaten down or the world in a negative way.. cy gindle

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