It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem I thought it was very unique from most others, the imagery was great and the flow as well. "but the sun slowly crept from the sky" other then that amazing job 5/5 GG23

Imagery is superb and this poem is very unique. You wrote this poem excellently. This is your best poem that I read. I really like it, you created amazing atmosphere. It really deserves 5/5

This was written so well, i like the fact that each stanza has 2 lines it makes the poem unique
i got a picture in my head while reading :P
great work
5/5

Amazing work. My sister had a friend who did that to himself and he ended up dying. thats an amazing poem and i think you should seriously think about writing a poetry book. nice job once again.