"How can a person be so icy
but so fiery and passionate also?"

I loved these lines the most! 5/5

A good expression of your feelings and emotions. Kept me interested and intrigued. Great write!

Very unique and interesting poem.
in fear of the icy burn
^This line is so powerful, I love it. You created great rhythm and you expressed your self beautifully. Maybe you can put one more stanza with a metaphors for your emotions? Anyway excellently written, it deserves 5/5