Comments : Innocence

  • 17 years ago

    by schylar

    This poem is kind of creepy, but in it's own sick way i thought it was kind of good

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    I was confused. I don't know if you're for the rapist or the rapee (or whatever you call it). But I liked the word choice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Rapist's perspective, however, I'm not a rapist haha

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Whoa..this is great... i really enjoyed reading this one...and i like the ending.

    the flow was great ..

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Now this i sorta found abit funny, that might sound weird but i did. they way you put this into the words was great. i loved the topic though. i have never read a poem like this one before, it's good to read about something different for a change, nicely done. def 5/5