Let's have a pillow fight

I really like this poem it is excellent, your wording is awesome and the topic is great
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Wow. i liked how you politely said not to bother you, thought that was greatly thought of. i loved the imagery you gave the reader, nice work. 5/5

I like it, I interpret it as likeing or being attracted to someone you shouldn't be?
i liked the imagery in the growth and the hatred growing like vines inside you. well done.

Yet somehow we can never muster up the strength to tell them to let us be.

You poem speaks of the heartfelt pain that many encouter in days of love.

--Sher

Interestingly written that makes sence.
Its one good poem.

Nazeer