Wow great word choice and flowing well. Very cute poem with great style and clarity. Its cohesive and having poetic qualities.

Tc
Fsams

The imagery created was beathtaking and sad.
the flow was great and the rhymes were well thought out!

Well done
an amazing poem
I liked the way you kept the topic on rose alive till the last
5/5
tc
your friend
Rohan

Great work keep it up.

What an intense immaginary you display with a few strokes of the keyboard. The emotion are heartfelt and leave one treading through their own heartaches they have endured.

--Sher

Ending is amazing!!! Very interesting poem, it is unique and different from classic love poems which is great. Last stanza is my favorite one. You described emotions excellently. This piece is deep and it has powerful atmosphere. 5/5

I love your word choice, an altogether well written poem. awesome!

Amazing. I'm new here, and yours are the first poem I red. I love roses, the thorns, the concept. Just amazing, you can really feel the despair for everytime you reach out and the only make you bleed..

Keep it up ^^

Very nice use of languae, imaginative

This poem is amazing. I love the deep emotion and beautiful use of language. Keep up the fantastic work. :)

There isn't anything I could say that hasn't already been said. Wonderful job 5/5

Wonderfully flowing, the end lost me a little, but over all i thought it was a worthy read, and a well done piece...thanks for the read

Wow...can't explain how that made me feel

I like this poem i like the end, even tho its draws you in. 4/5

I'm in two minds about this poem
One the one hand i love the concept of love taunting an individual and you accurately give off the impression of love as a cruel notion as well as the wondrous thing it is as well.
However, I'm not so keen on the rhyme scheme, part of it seems a bit too forced for me and i think you should try not to rhyme for the sake of rhyme.
but all in all i like it as a poem and kudos for the idea

I'll give you 4/5 (cause i'm a mean critic) but I do like it and thanks for your comment on my poem :)

all the best
Sondos

Damn I really like this poem..deep and makes me think....dont ever stop doin what ur doin....=)...

You're good at making your words flow, "Once alive
flourished over my head like light
I was safe at night
with roses by my side." your writing just flows. I really like it. Also could you read one of my poems and give me some feed back?

Okay... I don't think I have to say anything because your poem said it all... WOW, that was beautiful, I am in love with that poem!! it was so beautifully written, I don't know what more to say cos I don't have enough words to describe how talented you are!!