Very powerful and deep, with excellent wording and amazingly created atmosphere. I like it from the beginning to the end- you managed to express the emotions greatly.
My favorite stanza is:

-Lesson learned, Roses cause pain.
Life like the thorn, giving madness to the soul.
The solution Is to drop the rose....end the life.-

Well done
5/5 from me

5/5 well made! i like your work.

"Poison replaces blood.
Ashes of fear cloud the sun.
Let go of the love."

This was my favorite stanza.