WOW!! amazing job :)

This piece posses endless beauty within words and vivid imagery. Every line is truly wonderful, filled with excellently expressed emotions. I like the atmosphere that you created, it is superb from the beginning to the end.
I can't choose favorite part in this piece because every stanza is remarkable.
Keep up the great work!

What memories of love that are left by the pets whom touch our hearts. Long after they are gone. Such a heartfelt beautiful piece you have penned. It really touched my heart. I have lost 2 beloved pets in the past couple yrs they were 14 & 15 yrs old....we are never ready to let them go. Their memories are always there with us.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Excellent choice of wording used throughout the poem =]
I really enjoyed reading this poem it was lovely, you are a very talented writter!

Haha cute. i like the connection you went for.

here are some things i thought you could fix:
From my slumber my hands reach for your memory--from slumber my hands... you had too many my's
Fully Happy and content -- watch the capitalization.
And I am never alone --simply, period at the end.
The echo of your purring engine fills my dream ,--don't need the space.

and aww. for the last stanza- at first i thought the flow had just all disappeared, but when i read that last line. it was just a cute ending and all.

-kitty.

im gunna link this poem, so a friend can read it.

It's so cute!! I could picture this so perfectly! I hate cats, and I still loved this poem!!
KH

This is lovely. I have 3 cats, they realy do make great alarm clocks. 5/5

What a lovely way to describe a friend close to one's heart. your verse brings back the old saying that who needs words when hearts can speak?

thank you very much for your comments on my work. I feel truly touched by your appreciation.

peace and luck
shobhana

Hiya, thanks for your comment on my poem 'star of gold'
I am new to this site, well in fact any poetry site/club. I truly believe the standatd of poetry you exhibit is a goal I can only hope to acheive. You seem to have effortlessly portrayed a lifetimes worth of love in a pure simple shared moment. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece more than once.
If you can offer any advice for me in the future I would be be very greatful.

Michael

I really enjoyed this one something about it touched me and i thought it was great its a 5 out of 5 good job and keep writing

Very very nice.....Your talent seems to flow..

That was so well writen. such a great poem!

Very cute, i really enjoyed it

I loved your ode to your furry companion

GretaPullen ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

A beautiful development of what it is like to lose an animal. To many, including myself, it is like losing a human. For pets you can tell anything to and they tell no lies. Well done, excellent work. Greta. xo

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Mary ( F C D ) at 2008-02-04

This is so perceptive and reassuring, and sensual.

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NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-22

Very creative piece, greatly written. I like vivid imagery that you created, it is very detailed. Whole poem flows flawlessly and excellently expressed emotions deeply touched me. Truly enjoyable read. Every stanza holds equal amounts of beauty and sadness.

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shobhana kumar ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-25

My goodness, I didn't quite realize that there were two ways to read this verse. the love is so evident in the other, the pain so haunting in this one.

great work, dear friend

shobhana

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This poem rings close to home, I adore my dogs and cat, our pets seem always to give love and seldom ask for much in return, my dogs and cat always seem to know just when a little love is needed. This was a lovely poem that brought a smile to my face.
Very well written as usual

Grant

This is a poem about our cat Tiger who died just over a year ago. We still think of him often. he was almost 21 years old when he passed. They sure do grow on you don't they?

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

This was a great poem an ode to your cat a faithful partner

Absolutely amazing, i really enjoyed this poem, so much, i rescued my cat amba almost three years ago, and love her to peices on reading this i immeditely thought of her and gave her a cuddle, she is part of my family and there is always space for her in my heart. loved it 5/5 xx