Deepest Cut

by sara   Aug 7, 2007


You said you would never hurt me
That you would always protect me
Always stand by me
So why am I here yet again
Broken and afraid
Your promises
Your lies
And all your little games
Will one day all fade away
But my love for you will remain the same
No matter how hard I try
or how long I sit and cry
You will never love me the way
I love you
Maybe we are just simply not meant to be
So tell me you hate me
that you cant stand me
For both our sakes
Just tell me one more time before I die
Tell me please before my blood runs dry
Was I that much of a burden?
When I'm gone who will you criticize
Who will you make cry?
As many times that you hurt me
My smile remained
You never saw that it was you,
that cut me deeper than the rest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by S

    Very emotional, it does not bore... n enjoyed reading it~ nice one, keep it up... ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by matthew

    Fully can realte, nice use of words
    fully deserve a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
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    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.I can relate.It flowed very well and had alot of emotions,as many of these poems do.5/5
    Miranda

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Weel penned keep up the good work i like the way you show your emotions