by K3LSI3 Aug 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I'm sorry if I caused you pain. |
It didnt flow as well as your other work..but i like the concept of it..saying one thing and then thinking another..though i dont believe in comparing ones pain..for if its painful for the person thats all that matters...but good job with the poem..keep it up. |
Wow you did put some soul into this poem. I can say that even though this is a 'Suicide Note' it is still meaningful. |
by Raychil
I love the way you put your heart in this and you made it so deep and meaningful to yourself and others. Just maybe watch the flow a little, thats all. 5/5. |