Hey Hayley
This is truly an exceptional poem. You have written this with great emotion which then added to the poem's meaning. The way you have written this piece made me feel as though I was there through the hard times you were going through. I am sorry for you had to go through such a horrifying experience. You are a strong person and you have proven this fact through the actions you have taken. Stay strong for I know that someone out there is very much deserving of you...someone who would treat you with great respect.
All the best and take care
Kristina

Hi Hayley, long time no talk, this is such a sad poem, but I am glad you walked away fro such an experience. I wish you only the best. Love, Tim
P.S. Great poem too.

loved this it was pure dead brill even though it was sad.glad you made it to the other side.x/bluehun/x

wow kool poem. i can really relate to this one.