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by Taylor Aug 7, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / unexplained
Beautiful and amazing She was, that girl She walked around Like it was her world She felt perfect and complete She felt good about herself She had a great life Until she met someone else It was you, a boy Who she has never noticed before She liked to hang out with you As if she wanted more You treated her like royalty You claimed her as yours Her parents were shocked Because she didn't complain about her chores And the days went by And you started to change You started to act different And you kept your range You became perverted and rude Sour and cold When you let go of her She tried to stay bold You treated her like she was nothing You left her alone She was afraid to speak to you She got chills down to the bone One day you saw her How happy she was She just kept on smiling As she always does Then one night You looked at the sky You prayed to God Asking yourself why Why did you become this Why did you let her go When you've gone through all this trouble Just to let her know How much you loved her How much you wanted her as yours But now she's too afraid She's closed the doors It was you who let go of her And you still cry at dawn When you see her in the morning You realize, She's Gone
by LovelyDivine
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