Loved it. not creepy, but still very dark. 5/5~

loved this stanza:
"It's talons are sharp
It's fangs like daggers
It walks with liquid motion
In such a hypnotic swagger"

^_^ B-E-A-YOU-TEA-FULL!
:P

I mostly liked the same lines as xXFriendOfAFriendXx! This is beautiful! 5/5

Ok thats it lol..i've decided im not gonna add all of your poems to my favorites im just gonna add you to my favorite authors lol... i love this poem..good job!

This poem is extremely good! I loved it 5/5

Wow.. such beautiful wording in this one... really well done.. no badd comments here for sure!!

<3 ang

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Wow, I love this... I love dark poetry, and this is truly excellently written dark piece, with great imagery and captivating atmosphere. Original poem, too, with interesting rhythm.
Keep up!