by Tracy D Rollings Aug 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Sitting at a table, I saw ya looking at me |
by moonlil
Wow, that was amazing! I love it. Great job. |
Your poetry sounds so sincere, and this one isn't exception. Deep and heart- braking, very touching, as always. Keep up. 5/5 from me. |
by Wake
0_0 .. seriously spellbound.. a damn beautfiul way to say it.. helps.. really.. |
Wow, A lot of emotion in this piece.. Its so nice to find the people that sees the person inside and don't judge on what they see on the outside. This world needs more people like that :) I don't get the running away part though. That kinda threw me off a bit. Run away from home? Sounds like a rough life you described. Hopefully many people won't have to go though it. 5/5 Wonderful poem :) Thanks again for reading my story :P |
Finding ways to thank someone is the hardest thing to do in any scenario, and you captured all the emotion and it tells a very vivid story, well done tracy |