Great poem.So full of emotion.It really kept my attention while reading it.Yet another 5/5.
Miranda

Very emotional poem :) I enjoyed it very much. Excellent poem over all! 5/5!

-Lins.

The poem was a bit long but it kept me interested at all times, it's amazing how the words string along when your writing with another. Excellent flow and great imagery by both of you - 5/5 GG23

Long, the flow isn't great, but it's not bad. An over all good poem. 4/5

Well to be honest.. I have never collab with anyone yet.. So I really respect the works of the people who can do collabs. Good job!

Anyway I think it was a marvellous piece, the only thing I don't like about this poem is the constant use of I's =)

Nonetheless, a fantastic poem.

5/5

Very beautiful collab, the words really strung well to make it cohesive and coherent with the content and the caption. The flow is great and the imagery is superb. But there are little confusions of the use of then/than and some lines need punctuation( eg. line12)

Nevertheless its 5/5 for sure :)
Fsams

Very good poem, it really brought alot of emotion out of me when i read it........
good job
With Love Jake.

It was a good poem and i can relate but the problem is the flow you see when you make the first 2 lines rhyme and the bottom 2 lines rhyme it makes it sound forced like its not truely what you believe overall though good work 4/5 for trying

Wow it's pretty sad and sorrowful..you two did a good work with words and rhyme..But I could suggest something if you let me

I feel-Feeling in 2nd stanza

But it's just an idea
Keep it up,
Laura

An all too well message, spoken through great pens. I loved the wording, but it may have been my reading but some parts the flow just didn't quite make it. All in all a great poem still, and I enjoyed reading it :)

This was quite a cute poem, yet...the flow was a bit off and the rhymes were a bit unoriginal. But the meaning of this made it really good. If the rhymes were more unique, this poem would turn from cute to amazing. You did a good job in all though, great job!

Few lines aren't good but rest of this poem is excellent.
And is there a point to ask
Can we even unmask
All the things we never said
Why must these tears shed
^This is my favorite stanza. You described emotions superbly. I don't like rhyming but topic is great. 5/5

Good poem! Im not into looong poems. but it was very emotional and rhymed. Meaning was great.
5/5

I'm out of words. Nothing I can say will show you how much I loved this poem. If you don't know already, I am a bigger fan of the sadder, darker poems.. Poems about love and lost love, broken relationships, things like that. This poem really takes the cake, I have to say it is one of your best yet, Elaine. You and Marlanna did an excellent job on this.. hehe, now I am curious to see how she writes her poems since she helped you out on this.

I would tell you much more, but I am running out of time.. My mom is about to wake up and I need to hurry up and get off the pc.

5/5 <3

I dont care how long a poem is just as it gets the point out. Very good, loved this one. 5/5.

Long, yet kept me captured and kept me focused. a very good write, you both did an amzing job.
keep it up
love Tara-Kay
x

Oh wow all i can say is great poem. it had a really good flow and it was very enjoying to read. i loved it. 5/5

Awwww. such a sad poem. and a tear came from my eyes. i loved your both works here. great great work you work deserve 5/5.

This really touched me in a way I can't explain. It brought back some nice memories.