Im confused
who saved u
and what about an army?

Hmm.. err i must say im a bit confused about the ending.. too .. BUTTT..!!!.. that does'nt stop me from liking this piece.. even though i didnt get it whole .. the imagery was wonderful .. a great flow and marvelously told.. brilliant work..

still it wud help if i got the last part.. damn >.<

either way .. great work..

~Wake~

This was a story by Poe I rewrote it in a poem. It took me a good 2 weeks :P I had to do it for a project. You can look up the story and read it but its a difficult piece to read :P The ending just means that this French guy was a prisoner of a war and the they won the war and were saving their capture allies. The French came in and saved him before the enemies killed him off. Hope that makes sense ^_^ Thanks for all you that took your time to read it.

Excellent poem, i really liked it and it was well written, full of thrilling moves and excitement but good all the way through, I really hope some one saved the man in the poem, great write , very nice , keep it upi, your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,5/5