"If i burn all your pictures
Will your memory die away
Every single sore spot
That's hurt me everyday"
This stanza hit me like a Mac truck :)
this poem has a special place in my heart, its very heartfelt and filled with emotion and for me lots of meaning i gave it 5/5 :))

Thanks for the comment omg i so love this poem i guess u were trying to let some one go but yea wow i love it

Wow u r amazing i love your poems your def going on my favs.

Omg!!!! when i was reading that, there were tears in my eyes!!! i know that might sound kinda stupid, but its true!!!! i really liked that poem!!!! i think it was one of my favorites ive read!!!! good job!!!! :-)

Such a sad but beautiful peice, i loved it even though im not fond of long poems because i normaly drift off to other things but this actually caught my attention the whole way through. Its one of my favorites so far.

5/5

This is really good i love it.
thanks for your comments also. =]

I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

First off, I love the title. Very creative && it just sounds awesome. :P Second, it was a very long write but it was surely worth the read. It was a very emotional piece && it was beautifully written. Freakin' fabulous. (: Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow. just luving it. nice

I luv this poem, its sooo full of emotion and flows nicely. great work
"If i burn all your pictures
Will your memory die away"
i luv those lines they stand out and really catch my attention.
5/5

I liked this one a lot, i loved the message. i thought the first couple stanzas were a little wordy, other than that it was a fantastic poem. good job. 4*5
Kimberly

Awwwwz a very sad poem...but i liiked it alot!!! it had a good flow to it....and everything!!! 5/5

Havent read the poem yet,
But the title is amazing
"If I Burn all your pictures, will your memory die away"

Thats awesome...
5/5 (for the title atleast) :]

Okay fiest off i have 2 fav lines...the first being

The memory of a broken heart
Along with my corrupted mind
Stained by your contaminations
While being left behind

i feel this so completly relates to me and it makes me a little disappointed i did not come up with in myself..good job. i rarely say that often. anyways my other fav lines were the last stanza....the best of the poem i think.

great rhyme and reason. i loved this one as well. 5/5

Fabulous work! very impressive specially the title of the poem was very interesting.. i love and i enjoyed all the thougths. there are some few lines that i can truly relate and it made me ask questions to myself! u have really a great imagery.. all the words was totally perfect. keep it up5/5

Realy great poem, heartfelt and emotional, and so easy to relate to. I love the repeition of the title and I particularly liked the las couple of stanzas, asking all the questions. The flow was almost perfect and the rhythm great. Really nice write.

Sole.x

This has to be one of my favorites. i love this poem!!!!

Wow I just loved this! It was so powerful and I could deeply feel each word you used. The imagery was just heartbreakingly beautiful and it got your message across flawlessly. Great flow and amazing descriptions of sad emotions. Well done *5/5*

"If i erase you from my life
Will my world return from gray
Tell me. .If i burn all your pictures
Will your memory die away? "

I love it!&&I hate to tell you this but you can't get rid of memories that quickly...especially when they're about someone that used to mean a lot to you.Time is the only thing that can help.But sooner or later,it will be ok.5/5

<3Amber

Wow, this is beautiful
kinda reminded me of how
my first love after 2 years broke up
like just 4 days ago
but i like this poem 5/5