Missin u

by Xx trying to be strong but only just holding onxX   Aug 7, 2007


When I close my eyes
To go to sleep at night
I think about

All the times that we spent together
I think about how much I miss you
How I need you in my arms

How I need your loving
I need to feel your heart against mine
Beating faster every time

I want you to know that I'm here
And that I'm never going to leave you

I'm here threw the ups and the downs
I ain't ever going to go

Because my love for you is so so strong..

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  • 17 years ago

    by RazorBladeRomance1905

    I can so relate to this poem............... :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Ha! i think i know who this is for. not lover boy but a certain male called ................ (i'll leave it to your imagination) ((lol))

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This ones good, but it needs some changes and there is room for improvement. I guess " threw" is a typo, it shoud be "through" and in the 2nd last line"I ain't ever going to go" ain't sounds ungrammatical, instead you could use"I am never going to go" Still I will give you 5/5 coz u have the potential :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really lovely poem Amelia. 5/5

    Kalee

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