This is a really lovely poem Amelia. 5/5

Kalee

This ones good, but it needs some changes and there is room for improvement. I guess " threw" is a typo, it shoud be "through" and in the 2nd last line"I ain't ever going to go" ain't sounds ungrammatical, instead you could use"I am never going to go" Still I will give you 5/5 coz u have the potential :)

Tc
Fsams

Ha! i think i know who this is for. not lover boy but a certain male called ................ (i'll leave it to your imagination) ((lol))

I can so relate to this poem............... :(