by Vanessa Aug 7, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
The suffering, her suffering |
I had to read this a few times to comprehend, not the usualy style but still fitted nicely. I was a bit confused when you used the term 'dove'...did you mean drove. slightly cliche but still powerful imagery. well done xoxo |
by Cella Bella
Wow. This was quite amazing. I love the structure here. The repetition made for a very powerful read without being too overbearing. def a 5/5 |
by xxSuicidalxx
Wow! Spectaular poem! It is so sad but so beautiful! Amazing write!!!!! |
by Kyrodo
I know how it feels, when it feels like one's dying inside. Half-dead, half alive. Looking back though, I guess I was being kinda foolish. |
I love the way you've used repetition to enhance the more poowerful parts of the poem, it works really well. Such an in-depth piece (sorry for the pun, i didn't mean that literally lol) |