Wow! Great poem, you always impressed me! It is really sad and atmosphere that you created is amazing.
Well done! 5/5

One word,
AMAZING.
You're emotion was great,
you did this so wonderfully.
To the you the truth,
people who try to do this style,
they don't put enough emotion in it
making it seem dull for there are no rhymes
to make it better.
But you, wow!
You got it right on the spot,
you conquered this like no tomorrow.
You are fantastic,
you did wonderfully.
I can't even explain,
kudos to you.
You are very talented,
so talented.

Gab,
Your writting is breathtaking. Your imagery is so vivid the poem plays before my eyes. The words and emotion are so deep, it feel as if they are swallowing me, taking me to a different plane, far from the one were I exist.

You are very talented,
An impressing read.
5/5-- Elaine.