by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx Aug 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A laugh breaks the silence |
by MyEscape
HOLY COW! I read all three this was amazing. I mean, I could picture it all in my head and it was so well worded and the flow and rhyme were generally right on. It was very very good! |
by Hollymariee
Like I said when I commented on your first poem, it didn't need anymore parts. The first part is flawless, and now it's getting kindof long and the rhythm is off alot. |
Awww! PLEASE continue it! I love it sooo much. This was AMAZING. It is so sad and so sweet. You have SO much talent!! |
by Boy
Ohhh my friend. lovely it touched my heart. there is something inthis poem that attract others to read. |
by FallenGrace
This is absolutley awesome, i was hooked to every word! YOu've put your emotions across really well, its amazing, well done... |