This was a really good poem. You sound like a mature, experienced writer and your words are so beautiful.
Yet I think you took away from the beauty of it with the && stuff. It seemed really juvanile to me. My suggestion is (if you want to be taken seriously) stick with plain old english.

Awwh jess. >.<
this poem is so sweet. I know the feeling. I had this with my ex. its kind of a scary feeling to be so wrapped up in someone that you feel like it would be hard to breathe without em..