I would probably understand this poem a lot more if i knew what the world revive meant, well what context your using it in, but either way, wow....cool poem i really really liked it!

I liked the last two lines of each stanza, very well written 5/5

This was a lovely piece and it talks about our faith but the flow were a bit off coz i can't understand what u really trying to point out in here, is it trying to revive or our own choice? there are some lines that talks that way..well keep it up

It's about the sedentary lifestyle growing in America. It's about laziness.

In all honesty, I'm not to keen on this one.
It just seems to lack something, like you're holding back a little with your words..

I was also thrown by the fact most of the poem is in stanzas but then you have one couplet, I thought that distracted the flow.

I think if you put a little more work into this, it could become something beautiful.