In my perfect world

by June   Aug 8, 2007


In my perfect world ,
there would be nothing bad.
Everyone would be forever happy ,
because there would be no reason to be sad.

In my perfect world ,
there would be no guns and knifes.
Children would be safe to play ,
and lead normal lifes.

In my perfect world ,
there would be no poverty and starvation.
Racism wouldn't be heard of ,
no-one would face discrimination.

To sum up what I am trying to say ,
my perfect world would be a better place.
There would be no hate only love ,
with a much brighter future to face.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    June
    It would be so nice if wishes really came true. Great job om this piece.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I wish that was our world. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Lol, i like this poem, it made me smile, i think lots of people want a world like the one which you've described but its impossible as boys love their toys and adore violence, soz I liked the first three verses best as i liked the rhyming scheme best.