Lol, i like this poem, it made me smile, i think lots of people want a world like the one which you've described but its impossible as boys love their toys and adore violence, soz I liked the first three verses best as i liked the rhyming scheme best.

I wish that was our world. 5/5

June
It would be so nice if wishes really came true. Great job om this piece.
Take Care Cindy